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A minute of fresh vanilla and rewinding time

Oddly enough, the vanilla poem presented below is actually devoted to Quantumbreak. Or rather, thoughts about what each of us would have done, it is the opportunity to manage time. Someone will rob banks, someone-save people. And here I have – this is ^_ ^

“Why are you looking at me like this?
And this fold is bitter at the lips.
Or maybe say that I am a fool?
That in vain with you was so harsh and rude?

Ah, if I could, with a wave of my hand,
Turn back the world!
You didn’t stand here now,
Your gaze would not shine with water and ice.

I would be for those who let go back,
Not a prickly impudent, hiding trembling. »

– We will be so silent here? -You expect something else from me?

“I would move us there easily,
Where did you always dream to visit.
Lost in the jungle of the city
They will suddenly rise and come to life again.

Palaces and temples that have fallen for a long time,
The columns will proudly extend to the sky. « 

– Please do not need it with me. – Yeah, come on, pay me here.

“Bals, carriages, London on Christmas,
The ship is sailing noidverificationcasinos.co.uk in the wind, –
Any whim, any magic
I will get for you or die.

After centuries I will pave the ways
From web, smoke and mirrors « 

– I ask you, Antoshka, stop … – What can I say that?!

“I would transfer us to such a distance,
That I myself would not find a way back,
Not in this May, cold as February,
Not in this pain, hot like hell.

Well, you want to put life for it?!
I will make the whole world to lie at your feet! »

– I’m sorry, I was so frozen … I’m leaving. – Yeah, come on.
“Ah, if I could. « 

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Beautiful lyrical poems. Often, poems about relationships are quite pathos, and these seem very sincere)

My story is just that sometimes everything is much simpler than it seems. I hope you will be fine ^_ ^

In order to give another person warmth and make dreams does not have to be able to manage time) and in general I believe that there is nothing in life that could not be fixed, unless this is an impracticable disease and death.

And the verse is good, as always)

In general, not bad. Beautiful syllable, written with the soul, and from almost every line it blows with some kind of warm. I can’t write anything more unfolded now, I’m just falling asleep. The only thing, rewrite these moments with dialogs, look too contrasting and ridiculous against the background of general literature. I don’t know if the author’s style is or just because of small experience, but the eye cuts.

Thank you for the feedback) The contrast was planned initially, to demonstrate the difference in approaches to relations in imagination and in reality. As they say, « all lovers swear to fulfill more than they can, and do not even perform the possible ».

Thank you, a good verse. For some reason, for some reason, it did not go out to read smoothly, probably because of the idea with dialogs, but for the second time everything fell into place.

Always Everything in the world is easier than it seems to us.
But we, not seeing the simplicity of all this,
We create problems for ourselves that the severity
They are lying on us … at least there is no heaviness..)

P.S.:
The poem is wonderful, touches something inside.
But, excuse me for the immodesty, I would correct one line:

“Bals, carriages, London on Christmas
And a brig under sails in the wind, – – – – – –

In my opinion it is so more in the rhythm. Good to you..)

Fucking onion ninja … so many thoughts of this kind recently, but all this is pointless, for it is not feasible. Do not return the moments, do not survive the memories, do not return a person back, sit and destroy myself from the inside with such thoughts, the head understands that it is not necessary, and emotions are repeated the opposite and periodically the sounding thought “would be good in my head if we did not meet at all” ..